"pose for the thumbnail." Easily the best part. Nice job.
The animation was nice. But the recording could have been done a lot better. You need to get closer to the mic and eliminate the echoes. Lyrics weren't the smoothest either, but otherwise it was enjoyable.
I would love a series on this!
I can think of a few things that didn't make sense, like why he threw a grenade, or how he left the floating island, but honestly they weren't that important and the great animation more than made up for it. Certainly things to consider though.
Have you heard of HISHE? It's a popular Youtube channel - they do this kind of thing. I would watch some of their videos for inspiration.
Your animation wasn't bad, and the voice acting for the sniper was pretty good. Bane could have been a bit clearer, and it could have been a bit longer to get a feel for what was going on. But other than that, not bad.
Animation was great, but I just wasn't entertained at all by the story (about as unamused as your female lead). Your characters just seem really boring. Maybe if you tried changing up the emphasis on certain words, and not drag things out for so long, it would work better.
Bahaha! That's actually pretty funny. I think the animation is a good start, and the voice acting is really good.
I would perhaps add a few more sound effects, like for walking, and the fire, and the motion could be a little smoother. But the humor was definitely on point. I was hoping it'd be longer!
I liked it! The animation was very clean and pretty and sound was good. The mouth didn't match up with the words all that well, but otherwise I'd say job well done! I, too, look forward to future works!
Not bad on the animation. It has a very simple style, which works. And your voice acting isn't bad either, but the storyline didn't really make much sense to me. I expected some sort of punchline after talking about how much you hate Facebook and then saying to like your own page.. and then I realized you weren't joking about liking the page, so it was kind of confusing.
But I did legitimately laugh at "Pornhub." You've got great potential, I look forward to seeing more of your stuff!
What do you mean, not bad on the animation? It wa horrible lol. And not that good at voice acting eighter. But you got wrong at the part where I say I want you to like my fb page to destroy fb. That was a joke. I know it's confusing. And blame myself, if I had recorded another voice over for this, and adding more sarcastic voice, maybe then it would be more funny, and would make more sence. But I'm glad that people did get that part, I thought that nobody will understand the joke. And yeah, the pornhub thing was original, I can proudly say it is one of my best ideas. Thank you for your review, and I'll try to make more and better cartoons in the near future.
This animation is terrific. And I'm really intrigued about the story.
I would, however, say the voice acting could use some work. They sometimes don't feel like they're fully "in" the story if that makes sense. Maybe raspying up some of the voices or recording a little lower would be better. Otherwise, I look forward to the next one!
Wow! 4.5 stars for emotion and execution.
I like the stop motion. While not perfectly fluid, it's not bad, and its choppiness actually adds to the feeling of mystery. The music is also a good fit. The only thing I would think of to perhaps change is the ending. I'm not totally sure what the purpose was, or the storyline behind this video, just based on the video. Your description sheds some light on this. What was our paper clip friend's objective?
Just some things to keep in mind. Keep up the great work!
Thanks, perhaps then I will continue this subject, but so far there are no reasons and why paper clips, I very much like to make of them different things, actually the person from the movie is made of paper clips.
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