DarlingMaxim's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fluffy Mob]

Yeah, you really need to make your descriptions more.... descriptive, if you want people to really appreciate this. Animation was cool, but I had no idea what was going on, or why.

LittleCuteCorpse responds:

thx, I fixed

[Facebook Sucks]

Not bad on the animation. It has a very simple style, which works. And your voice acting isn't bad either, but the storyline didn't really make much sense to me. I expected some sort of punchline after talking about how much you hate Facebook and then saying to like your own page.. and then I realized you weren't joking about liking the page, so it was kind of confusing.

But I did legitimately laugh at "Pornhub." You've got great potential, I look forward to seeing more of your stuff!

RedAndrew responds:

What do you mean, not bad on the animation? It wa horrible lol. And not that good at voice acting eighter. But you got wrong at the part where I say I want you to like my fb page to destroy fb. That was a joke. I know it's confusing. And blame myself, if I had recorded another voice over for this, and adding more sarcastic voice, maybe then it would be more funny, and would make more sence. But I'm glad that people did get that part, I thought that nobody will understand the joke. And yeah, the pornhub thing was original, I can proudly say it is one of my best ideas. Thank you for your review, and I'll try to make more and better cartoons in the near future.

[Animation movie "Paper cl]

Wow! 4.5 stars for emotion and execution.

I like the stop motion. While not perfectly fluid, it's not bad, and its choppiness actually adds to the feeling of mystery. The music is also a good fit. The only thing I would think of to perhaps change is the ending. I'm not totally sure what the purpose was, or the storyline behind this video, just based on the video. Your description sheds some light on this. What was our paper clip friend's objective?

Just some things to keep in mind. Keep up the great work!

larit responds:

Thanks, perhaps then I will continue this subject, but so far there are no reasons and why paper clips, I very much like to make of them different things, actually the person from the movie is made of paper clips.

[The Question]

Haha, this isn't bad. Clever use of background images, and decent animation.

I will say, however, that while stick figures can be great story tellers, I think you could have done more with it. Have them move a little more while talking, or give them faces. (I couldn't tell who was talking sometimes). The voice over work was pretty good as well. It does sounds a bit "fake," though, if that makes sense - like I could tell it wasn't the stick figures talking. Try standing closer or farther away from your mic and try a pop filter. Trial and error I always say.

But it's a good start, so kudos to you! I liked it :)

plasticapple responds:

Thank you so much for your advice, Garaladin! I'm actually working on a new stick figure animation and your comment has helped me change things I haven't noticed before. Thank you again! :)